Monday, 15 January 2018

The House of Mountfathom - Book Review

The House of Mountfathom
Nigel McDowell


The House of Mountfathom. A place of wonder, magic and mystery. A house with doors that lead to faraway places, where shape-shifting and smoke-summoning are as commonplace as the rising and setting of the sun.

Luke is the son of the noble house with a magical education to fulfil; Killian, a sharp-tongued street urchin with an agenda of his own. Together the pair will have to tread a unique and brave path if they are to save the House of Mountfathom and preserve the very peace of the land…


This book was more unique than most. I throughly enjoyed the enchanting descriptions that contributed to the world building, as well as the author’s choppy yet poetic writing style. However the story itself was nothing like I expected, and while I can’t say I loved the plot, it did strike a chord that left me thinking about it long after the last page was turned. 

Luke is the only child of Lord and Lady Mounthfathom, one day to inherit the family’s magical mansion, along with the responsibility to remain a peace keeper for the realm. But as Luke’s training progresses, unrest and uprisings break out across the country, and suddenly he and his family are stuck between two warring sides - both of whom thirst for the destruction of Luke’s family, and all who wield the power of magic… 

 I found this a very difficult book to review.

The opening prologue is rather confusing (although you will get an “A-HA” moment near the end of the book) but that, mixed with the clipped writing style makes the first few pages difficult to navigate. However I soon found myself really enjoying the choppy writing. It keep’s you present, allowing you to live in the story alongside the characters, and I felt it really enhanced the descriptions.

However while the writing felt quick, it also helped balance the slow unfurling of the plot. And by slow I mean crawling. You literally follow the main character Luke from cradle to mid-teens, and while I wasn't bored reading through his childhood, after I finished the book I couldn't help but wonder WHAT the point of it all was - other than a chance to enrich the world. 

Mid-way through the book though, we are introduced to a new character, Killian, who spices things up as he is the opposite to Luke in every way. From Killian’s point of entry, the story is then split into Killian and Luke’s dual narratives, which really helps up the pacing. 

By the time you are two thirds into the story, the action really begins to snowball, faster and faster… until it suddenly stops. Not just stops, but the action literally disappears, and the story takes a sudden new route. As a reader this really threw me, and left me completely baffled with the ending. 

However, what kept me reading was throughout the book there was an underlying theme surrounding Luke, centring around his fear of stepping away from his sheltered life into the unknown - in this case - a magical void of darkness in which lurks a monster.

Is that monster death? Life? Fear itself? In many ways - this sudden philosophical turn in the story is left to the readers imagination, but this was the moment I found Nigel McDowell’s writing truly beautiful, and extremely deep. I also felt like the book was trying to send some kind of message or life lesson, and unfortunately, I hate when books do that. 

Therefore somewhat disgruntled by the ending, I then went on to read the authors Bio as I usually do, only to discover that Nigel McDowell passed away at the age of 34, shortly after completion of this novel. 


I’m not sure why, but suddenly I appreciated this book a lot more. I’m only surmising, but I felt this story was very personal to the author and is perhaps even a echo of his thoughts and what ifs. 

It turned what I thought was a preachy ending, into a story that required some more time for contemplation and quiet reflection.

Even so, I don't think this book is for everyone. Sold as a middle-grade novel, I think children will be ensnared by the magic and imagination of the world and characters, but regardless of age - I think most readers will still find the story itself somewhat flat. All in all, I’d give this book 3 stars. However I will most definitely be reading Nigel McDowell’s other two books, THE BLACK NORTH, and TALES FROM PITCH END. 

RIP Nigel McDowell. 

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Have any of you read this book? If so what were you're thoughts? Or did you prefer another of the authors books?

Monday, 8 January 2018

Sticking to your Goals!

(New Years Eve Bonfire in Allendale - warm and toasty!)

Sticking To Your Goals (Writing Edition!)

Hey everyone. HAPPY NEW YEAR! I wish you all health, happiness and the best of luck for achieving everything you want in 2018 :) With a clean slate ahead of us, I hope we can all make this year a memorable one!

So today I wanted to talk about methods that help me stay on track with my goals. I’m sure many of you have written lists, set new year’s resolutions, and made plans about all the things you want to achieve… but while the good intentions are always there, I for one find sticking to my goals super difficult.

After doing lots of research into the habits of successful people (I found many of them do very similar things) here are the tips and tricks that help make me more productive.


If you google this term, so many things will come up, but the basis of the idea is to HANDWRITE three pages by letting everything that comes to mind spill out onto the page. Don’t worry if it makes no sense - just write it down - even if your writing, “I don't know what to write.” Sit there for five minutes and something will come... Probably.

I like morning pages because while I only write them every other day, they leave me clear headed and with a much better grasp of exactly WHAT is going on in my brain! It allows me to see any obstacles, making morning pages my peak problem solving time. 

My pages tend to vary day to day. Sometimes they are more like diary entries, often recounting things I did the previous day, other times they focus on my future goals and dreams. For the most part though, they give me the opportunity to brainstorm ideas (without feeling guilty that I’m cheating on my current project), even if the ideas are only half formed. 

Sometimes I jot down my frustrations at myself, my characters, my story in general, and more often than not, solutions soon present themselves.

I would really, really recommend giving morning  pages (or nighttime pages  - time doesn't really matter) a go. They have helped not just with my writing, but often with my day to day life as well.


Another trick is to use writing prompts. Even five minutes spent on a fixed task can loosen up those writing muscles and get your creativity flowing! 

You can find plenty of story prompts online, but some books I would recommend are:

Bird by Bird by Anne Lamott 
Anything written by James Scott Bell
The Magic Words by Cheryl B. Klein 


I love t0-do lists. I'm always making them... and until a few months ago, nearly always ignoring them. Yet I found early on, if my list looks like this:

  • Make Doctors Appointment
  • Write 1000 words
  • Write a Book Review
  • Critique 1 Chapter for X

….. NOTHING EVER GETS DONE! Not only would my list just grow, but I would procrastinate the day away! However when I write my list like this, everything seems so much more achievable:

  • Ring Doctor’s on 0123456789 at 9.30am to make an appointment. (+ set a timed reminder on your phone)
  • Write Classroom scene:

       - Introduce Will-o-the-wisp teacher + Petey & Ajax. 
    - Rin gets bullied (stings, bites, raised hand)
    - Explain magic system of the school x 3 types of monster

  • Review Wendy Darling Book 3: Spend 30 minutes 
  • Read & Critique 3 pages for X: Spend 30 minutes

Don’t just write down WHAT you need to do. Write down HOW these things will be done, and WHEN they will be done by. Bigger tasks you can break down into bitesize chunks, for example rather than just writing 1000 words, my target is a specific scene, and from that scene I have three smaller goals which can be tackled one at a time.

If you can’t break your workload down physically, then I suggest cutting it into chunks of time. Often if I set myself 30 minutes to do something, I often find that I will actually sit there for an hour or more. It’s all about getting that momentum going.

EXTRA TIP FOR WRITERS: I mentioned in a previous post, WRITING HACKS AND TRICKS, that one of my favourite tools is an App called WRITERS BLOCK. Like it says on the tin, it blocks me from doing anything else on my computer until I hit my word count goal. 

If I’m being extra tricksty with myself, I load it up the night before. That way, when I open up my computer the next day, writing is literally the only thing I can do! The other option, to sit and type a_space_a_space a thousand times over to clear my screen - is oddly - not that appealing. This is a good trick to get your fingers typing at the start of the day!


We will always have a 101 things to do - that’s life. However each week I write out all my upcoming tasks, then every night I pick no more than FIVE THINGS  that I definitely want to get done the next day. 

However my GOLDEN RULE is this - Every day, at least ONE item on that list needs to help me work toward a LONG TERM GOAL. As an aspiring writer - usually that thing for me is writing, or reading about writing, looking for critique partners, or even attending a writing class. I’ve even written down “movie marathon” on my list once, while I was in search of inspiration. Hey, it all counts! - though try not to cheat too often :P

DON’T CONFUSE ERRANDS WITH GOALS! You will always feel better about yourself if you do one thing that will bring you closer to fulfilling your dreams!

(Only 8K into edits - I really need to push on....)


I know many bloggers who are really into bullet-journalling, and while I love seeing the creative spreads that people do, for the most part, I’m quite happy with a plain old diary.

However when it comes to hitting word counts (and oddly - meeting my financial goals) I love creating pretty trackers that I can colour in at every milestone (or stepping stone) I reach! Much like the STICKY STAR SYSTEM I use for writing - (Writing Hacks & Tricks) -colouring in a tiny square in my bullet journal gives me the same sense of pleasure and achievement. 

However if you can TURN A TASK INTO A REWARD than even better! Right now I’m trying very hard to knit a patchwork blanket. I’m slowly getting close to finishing, but rather than write: Knit one Square onto my to-do list, I keep this project off my list entirely. Instead, this is my reward for completing the day’s tasks. When I tick off my five to-dos, then I get to knit one square, put my feet up and listening to an Audio Book. Win win for me :)

Other Self-rewards:

  • Bullet Journaling - like I said, I enjoy creating my tracker pages, so this is an end of day reward (again while listening to an Audio Book).
  • Cooking - I love trying out new recipes or baking things.
  • Writing - Yes, you read that right! Sometimes when I’m really in the flow of my story - or have left off in an exciting place - I can’t wait to get back to my book! If that’s the case, writing is my reward for completing the more boring tasks like laundry and admin.

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What methods do you use to stay on task? Do any of these methods work for you? I would love it if you could let me know in the comments. I’m always on the look out to try new things that will help me boost my productivity!

Sunday, 31 December 2017

2017 in Review

(The Caveman in a cave outside Budapest!)

End of Year Wrap Up

So for the last two months, my urge to blog has somewhat fizzled out. However despite my new found reluctance, I love my blog very much and have no intention of giving it up. 

Through Whisperingwords I have met some really incredible people - generally other bloggers who inspire me to try new things, or push me to achieve my own goals - but honestly its just lovely talking to others who share my love of books. 

Therefore while many of you are probably wondering if I fell of the face of the earth - fear not - I will be returning with plenty of new posts next year. 


For 2017 it was my goal to read 100 books. I’m actually on 109 (soon to be 110) and I hit my goodreads goal back in October. Strangely though I don't feel so celebratory of this fact. While I don't regret the books I read, I often felt I was forcing myself to read to achieve this goal - which in turn led to my lack of inspiration for blogging. It also meant that other important things - like my own writing - got neglected. As you can probably tell - I’m not so great at prioritising! 

Yet this is why for 2018 my Goodreads goal is…. 1. 

Of course that doesn't mean I will only read one book, I’d be very surprised if I read less than fifty. Of course I’ll still keep track of my reading, but by not setting a goal, I already feel that I’ve freed up so much time!

I also enjoy reading non-fiction, especially anything about lifestyle and being the best you that you can be. I travel lots and lots, and I want expand my blog to include these things. While I’ll still post book reviews, let’s face it, writing constant book reviews is becoming pretty repetitive for me, so I can only imagine how dull it must be for all of you. 

2018 I’ll be mixing things up!
Travel Posts. Motivational Posts. Writing Posts. 

… but still some book reviews of course.


(Old Ruins in Autumn)

2017 highlights


  1. China
  2. Hong-Kong
  3. Indonesia
  4. Japan (Still my favourite place!)
  5. Australia
  6. Canada
  7. England & Scotland
  8. Poland
  9. Hungary - Budapest
  10. Prague


*Most of the these were part of a series so I’ve left links to the review of the first books* 

  1. Fire & Flood Duology by Victoria Scott. (Dystopian YA - better, I thought, than the hunger games!)
  2. Red Winter Trilogy by Annette Marie. (Awesome Fantasy set in Japan!)
  3. The Dream Snatcher Trilogy by Abi Elphinstone. (An Epic Middle Grade Adventure)
  4. Frogkisser! By Garth Nix (Standalone MG/YA Fairytale)
  5. The Winners Curse Trilogy! By Marie Rutkoski (YA Romantic Fantasy/Dystopian?)
  6. Six of Crows Duology by Leigh Bardugo. (Epic Fantasy Heist - wish I’d read this sooner!)
  7. A Court of Wing’s and Ruin by Sarah J. Maas. (Epic Fanasty - you either love it or you hate it!)
  8. Hunted by Meagan Spooner (Beauty and the Beast Retelling - beautifully old school writing!)
  9. The Wendy Darling Trilogy by Colleen Oakes (Breathtakingly Dark Peter Pan retelling!)
  10. A Dragon with a Chocolate Heart by Stephanie Burgis (Loved this cheery Middle Grade Fantasy so so much!)

(Stumbling into a blizzard in Zakopane!)


On December 23rd, my mum and lovely new step-dad finally tied the knot after 17 years of being together! Incidentally it was also the first time the whole family has been together for 25 years, and I know it meant so much to my grandma to have everyone she loved in one place.


I’m actually very behind on my writing, but I drafted a MG fantasy and am now knee deep in edits, plus I have two more YA fantasy novels all outlined and ready to go. Could 2018 be the year I get an agent…? Fingers crossed!


My biggest thrill of the year and definitely something I would do again!

MY MOST POPULAR POST WAS: Writing Hacks & Tricks


(My grandma on xmas-day. Looking good for 88!)

Sadly however, the year was not all sunshine and joy. There were dark blots during some months and I feel they too deserve mentioning. 

Unexpected Tragedy 

In March 2017, my boyfriend’s younger brother (let’s call him X) was shot outside his home in North-Vancouver. After days fighting for his life, he miraculously pulled through, but has since lost all use of his legs. He has just turned 23. 

He is the strongest, most amazing person I know.

Rush onto December 2017. Nine months on and X is still wheel-chair bound, however he has made two paralympic teams, plays regular wheel-chair sports, and has signed up for just about every clinical trial available to man. He jokes and laughs, terrifies us all by coming down the stairs in his wheel-chair - but most importantly - he has fully committed himself to achieving what the doctors say, is the impossible task of walking again.

If anyone can do it, he can! And I’m looking forward to the day when he proves those doctors wrong!


… and luckily suffered only a broken leg. Still at 11.30pm at night, it was terrifying experience that I never wish to repeat. And while I in no way blame the driver (my dog slipped between a broken slat in a park fence - there was no way the driver would have seen him coming) it would have been nice if the driver hadn't just driven off.

However you will be pleased to know my puppy-dog has since made a full recovery! Although if there is ever a petition going to create some kind of 999 number for animals, please let me know and I will sign right up!


I mentioned that in October my grandmother moved into a care-home - and while I’m pleased to report she totally loves it and has become an utter social butterfly (We now have to be fitted into her diary to see her) - she does have some days better than others. 

While mostly she can laugh about it, its hard on those days when she forgets what year it is, or who is (or isn't) still alive. But I’m always so very proud of her for soldiering on. Having lived all over the world herself, she is the ultimate inspiration behind my own travels, and if I ever reach 88, I hope I can be just as brave and awesome as she is. 

With that in mind I just want to send a collective group hug out to anyone else who has a friend or relative going through the same thing. As my grandma says, “you have to live for the good moments by pressing on through the bad. Good times will come again.”

And on that note, I will end this post here. 

Best wishes to all of you! I’ll see you again in the New Year!


Wednesday, 8 November 2017

Voices of YA#

#Voices of YA Tag!

Firstly I want to say a huge THANK YOU to Amy@AMagicalWorldOfWords for tagging me. Considering it was back in July, apologies that its taken me so long to answer!

Also thank you to Caitlin @QuillsandCoffee for coming up with the original Voices of YA# - those were some good questions :)


  1. What draws you to write  YA?

I think what I find exciting about YA is all the new experiences. Teenage years are usually when you have your first romance, first kiss… and normally when you take that first step into discovering who you are and what you are capable of. Catching these things in a story is thrilling and I love sharing these experiences alongside my characters. 

2) Describe your writing process. Do you like outlines and structure, or seeing where the story takes you?

I like to experiment with my writing, trying new methods when the old ones grow stale. However I always start a story with at least an image of the ending, and I only ever plot a couple of chapters in advance. These are like story beats - points I want to hit upon in each chapter - but the journey between the points is completely made up along the way.

However I find it very useful to work with a reward system. My favourite is something I discovered on V.E Schwab’s youtube channel. The star method :) Basically I give myself a star for every 1000 words I hit. The app WRITERS BLOCK is also incredibly useful to me, blocking off EVERYTHING until my word target is hit. You can find more info about it this post HERE.

3) How long have you been writing? Where are you in your journey?

I’m currently finishing up edits of my second book - A MG Fantasy which I will start querying to agents soon. Thankfully this book only took me a year to write. My previous a novel (A YA Fantasy that will never see the light of day) I worked on for nearly ten years! 

As you can imagine, like many first books it was dreadful, but that book taught me a lot about writing and showed me I could indeed, finishing writing a full length novel. Even now that novel will always have a warm place in my heart.

Otherwise I read a lot as a child. I remember though I was seven years old when I first tried my hand at writing something. It was 1997, my mum had brought us a computer that used the old dial-up broadband, and I recall sitting down and typing out a story about pirates. The main character had my name (although I swear the character was not me!) but I still have that first story… although it never was finished.

4) What do you need to write? Coffee? Music?

Thinking time - which usually requires silence or music without lyrics. Movie soundtracks or trailer scores are my usual go to. Otherwise I use a pen and paper for plotting, and will occasionally write a scene out long hand, but only when I’m stuck. Normally I write straight onto my laptop, and while a cup of tea or coffee isn't essential, it is a nice perk. 

However I sometimes also write at the gym. Between brutal sets of weight lifting, squats and whatever other torture my fitness-freak-boyfriend enjoys putting me thorough - I found I can escape the pain by thinking about the next few lines of my story. I’ll repeat them over and over in my head and as soon as I get a break, I jot them down on my phone to type up later. Although I do like running on the treadmill - that’s also good plotting time!

5) If you could offer up one piece of advice to another writer (other than “don’t give up”) what would it be?

Find a good critique partner! You’re usually too close to the story to see any faults or plot holes, plus a great critique partner will also cheer you on and help keep you accountable to writing!

I would also say read books on the craft. After I finished my ten year slog through book one, I took a break from writing to read every book on the craft I could find. It helped my writing immensely! Books with exercises are particularly helpful. For those writing children’s fiction, I would totally recommend THE MAGIC OF WORDS by Cheryl B. Klein. Also TAKE OFF YOUR PANTS AND OUTLINE by LIBBIE HAWKER is great for trying your hand at plotting.


1) What book still has you reeling from it’s plot twist?

Sadly the only book that totally shocked me this year did so in a really negative way. And that was the ending to Erika Johansen’s Queen of the Tearling Trilogy. I had loved those books so so much, but I absolutely detested the ending of the last book. It made the whole story so redundant and even months on, I’m still sore about it!

2) What books are you most anticipating for this year?

This is a really hard one, but a book that I'm super excited to pick up is Phillip Pullman's new one: THE BOOK OF DUST. I loved his dark materials series so much as a child, although I appreciated the books so much more after re-reading them as an adult. 

3) What is your favourite quote from YA lit?

A quote that always stuck with me was from Laini Taylor’s DAUGHTER OF SMOKE AND BONE. All I know is that if I ever have children, I’m sharing this advice with them:

“I don't know many rules to live by,' he'd said. 'But here's one. It's simple. Don't put anything unnecessary into yourself. No poisons or chemicals, no fumes or smoke or alcohol, no sharp objects, no inessential needles--drug or inessential penises either.'

'Inessential penises?' Karou had repeated, delighted with the phrase in spite of her grief. 'Is there any such thing as an essential one?'

'When an essential one comes along, you'll know,' he'd replied.” 

4) What book do you most hope will have a movie adaption?

I’m probably picking a cliche but I would love to see any of Sarah J Maas’ books adapted to film. The same with Leigh Bardugo’s Six of Crows. I feel there just aren't enough High Fantasy movies and I. WANT. MORE!



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